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jalfaro

Location: Stockton CA

Post Fri Mar 10, 2006 1:28 am   Reply with quote         


This is not done yet, far from it... but there is something missing, perhaps composition? or perhaps the mood should be changed to a night? evening? what do you guys think...need opinions- I was going to post this for the upcoming "budding Tree" pic but I enjoyed working on it so much I think Im going to keep it for my portfolio,...so give me your opinions guys, much appreciated!!!!!




Synthvet

Location: Oregon

Post Fri Mar 10, 2006 3:30 am   Reply with quote         


If you bring that to Oregon, you better wear a helmet.... Laughing Laughing Laughing




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yello_piggy

Location: Vienna/Austria/Europe

Post Fri Mar 10, 2006 8:01 am   Reply with quote         


in my opinion there is some chrome and metal-look missing, and you should spend some minutes on her right hand




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jalfaro

Location: Stockton CA

Post Fri Mar 10, 2006 11:09 am   Reply with quote         


Thanks, what about the composition? where does your eye end up?




ReyRey

Location: In a world of $#!t

Post Fri Mar 10, 2006 11:41 am   Reply with quote         


The comp seems fine but you won't really know until you fix the hand (like piggy said) beacause that is where the eye goes. The eye catches that something is wrong and goes right to that angle where the hand crosses the bike. Fix that and I think you will find that the comp does not bother you as much.




mikey

Location: Somerville MA

Post Fri Mar 10, 2006 11:54 am   Reply with quote         


Post it again and make it smaller" it takes up too much space. great idea! work on the hand and re post it" and we can go from there. I like your artwork! ~ Very Happy




jalfaro

Location: Stockton CA

Post Fri Mar 10, 2006 4:17 pm   Reply with quote         


appreciate the comments guys thanks, Ill post it again tonight. Im doing part of my Sci fi portfolio as " Exotic chicks and Exotic Bikes" theme --thanks again

sorry about the size, didnt realize it was that big when I first posted it




jalfaro

Location: Stockton CA

Post Sun Mar 12, 2006 11:13 pm   Reply with quote         


here it is, the final composition, What do you guys think?






mikey

Location: Somerville MA

Post Mon Mar 13, 2006 12:02 am   Reply with quote         


I think it looks great! ~ I just happened to be here when you uploaded it" Colors, idea lighting, movement, concept and originality is quite good jalfaro" very well done! Very Happy your a great artist! Cool




Post Mon Mar 13, 2006 1:59 am   Reply with quote         


Awesome job. Looks really great.

The only thing I'm not digging is the ground texture.




jalfaro

Location: Stockton CA

Post Mon Mar 13, 2006 11:06 am   Reply with quote         


Yeah, I wasnt completely happy with the ground either, but I originally based the whole thing on that ground, so I left it in there. I was going to apply a median to it, but then when I post it up everyone is going to wonder where the source is at..(budding tree) it was either this one or a pic of insana binladden poking his neck trough a hole in the ground with the little tree at the top of his head-tough choice




Post Mon Mar 13, 2006 11:32 am   Reply with quote         


Everything looks really good! The lighting/shading is very nice.

Only thing I don't like is the hand. It still looks like a foot. Not resting on the bike realistically. Otherwise, I think it looks great!

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Meaty

Location: cheshire/uk

Post Mon Mar 13, 2006 7:35 pm   Reply with quote         


Looks great, not sure im that fussed on the cape though, the original you posted without the cape looked a bit better in my opinion. Lighting is good but i think the boob shadow is a little too dark compared with the rest of the shadows. also i think her inside of her leg could do with a bit of shadow also. Very nice job though.




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Micose

Location: Quebec (CAN) & France

Post Mon Mar 13, 2006 7:42 pm   Reply with quote         


you should not post works like this man,it's too big, it's kinda risky somehow to put jpegs this size on the net. Good work.
jalfaro

Location: Stockton CA

Post Mon Mar 13, 2006 9:01 pm   Reply with quote         


What do you mean -risky- Micose?, like somebody stealing it risky?




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