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Sh!Za

Location: Right here

Post Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:34 pm   Reply with quote         


yeah you are right TOFU! here are the lyrics: (pls dont laugh)

GODDAMN

Communication's dead!
Children loose their heads, lose their heads in the internet

THIS WORLD IS SO IN-SAAAAAAANE,
I CAN JUST SAY: GODDAMN!

Children stare with open mouth on flats
They’re getting ill and they’re getting fat

THIS WORLD IS SO IN-SAAAAAAANE,
I CAN JUST SAY: GODDAMN!
I CAN JUST SAY: GODDAMN!
I CAN JUST SAY: GODDAMN!


LIKE YOU

And I try…
to lose my mind!
I think about it…
all the time!

And I feel…
nothing at all!
I would be so helpless,
if I fall!

If I faaall, if I faaaaal…
If I faaall, if I faaaaall!!!!

I need, somebody,
to help me with my sorrows!
I need,
someone like you!!!

And you think,
I’d be so strong.
But if I am faithful,
I just don’t get along!


LITTLE THINGS

You hurry from place to place,
You have no break.
You need your time, need your soul,
start to emancipate!

You don’t feel clever, you don’t feel good.
You set great store by misunderstood.
You’ve got everything,
And you’ve got nothing, too!

No matter, what you think.
Important are the the little things.
- Take care of that, what's near to you!

It’s not the gigantic gifts or words,
that are worth your time.
It is the little things in life,
that make you smile!


WAIT

art consists of inventing always something new
there are always several ways to your goal

find your way, find your way
find your way, find your way, find your way........

what you need is an ingenious idea lying deep in your brain (gain)
i'm trying and i'm thinking but i can't kill the pain
it makes no difference how long it still takes...
and what i know is that I can wait!

art is inexplicably and not for sale
you have to feel it now or you will fail

Do what u want, do what u want, do what u want....


I DONT KNOW

You are weak enough, for everything u do,
you telling all the stuff, I call u just a fool.

Im strong enough for everything u do,
u play with another games, you play things so cool!

I dont know, i have to do, you are just, just a fool
I dont know i have to do, to do, to dooooooo!


HISTORY

We've grown up in a bitter world,
your shoud for help, wont be heard!
Everybody's depressed by his own story,
nobody thinks about times of glory

History, rest in peace!
future comes, the past is free!
to be approved, cause u cant change,
change the world - right here, right now!

That life gave to all of us,
we just got on thing, in wich we trust!
Thats our will, faith n hope,
faith n hope.....

Now i'm lying in my bed,
and thinking with my over loading head!
how nice could it be,
if I'm free, if I'm free!!!




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When I walk across the water, then my critics say, he can't even swim!
Sh!Za

Location: Right here

Post Sat Dec 04, 2010 7:58 am   Reply with quote         


is it soooo bad?

Sad Sad I believe its better for me to write german lyrics.......




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Tesore

Location: On the way to Utopia!

Post Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:29 am   Reply with quote         


We are totaly speechless!




ReinMan

Location: Kingston, ONTARIO, CAN

Post Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:45 am   Reply with quote         


Shiza: not that I know anything about music or songwriting, but your lyrics are not that bad. You've got some good ideas there and you've put them in English goodly much. Cool

I've seem WAY WAY worse lyrics than the ones you have. I wouldn't worry too much about it, eh? Wink reindeer




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Sh!Za

Location: Right here

Post Sun Dec 05, 2010 10:20 am   Reply with quote         


ReinMan wrote:
Shiza: not that I know anything about music or songwriting, but your lyrics are not that bad. You've got some good ideas there and you've put them in English goodly much. Cool

I've seem WAY WAY worse lyrics than the ones you have. I wouldn't worry too much about it, eh? Wink reindeer


first THX rein man! but the content isnt the problem!!! my problem is the right spelling and grammar! I hope anybody can help me with this! I dont wanna trust in google translator Wink




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kittie

Location: Florida

Post Tue Dec 07, 2010 9:01 am   Reply with quote         


I have to leave soon so I only had time to skim....

Sounds good and I'd like to hear them for real, but this is the thing I caught real quick..

"Im strong enough for everything u do,
u play with another games, you play things so cool! "

You play with another games.... not sure what the intent is there, perhaps "You play other games"?
Or "You play with another's games"?

Good luck. Smile




kittie

Location: Florida

Post Tue Dec 07, 2010 9:03 am   Reply with quote         


Also this could just be a typo but-

That life gave to all of us,
we just got on thing, in wich we trust!
Thats our will, faith n hope,
faith n hope.....

"We just got -one- thing, in -which- we trust!

Smile




Sh!Za

Location: Right here

Post Tue Dec 07, 2010 10:44 am   Reply with quote         


first many thx for your help kittie!

yeah you are right: "We just got -one- thing, in -which- we trust!" that was a spelling mistake, wich I havnt seen!

and with this line "u play with another games " i wanna descripe people, who take advantage of someone!

but I think it should be: "u play with others games"
right?!




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Tesore

Location: On the way to Utopia!

Post Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:13 am   Reply with quote         


You play with another games

You play games with others.. (other man)




kittie

Location: Florida

Post Tue Dec 07, 2010 12:36 pm   Reply with quote         


Ok, home for the day... let's see what we have.


GODDAMN

Communication's dead!
Children loose their heads, lose their heads in the internet (loose their heads? As in they're not as tight on their shoulders? Or did you mean lose just like in the second part?)

THIS WORLD IS SO IN-SAAAAAAANE,
I CAN JUST SAY: GODDAMN!

Children stare with open mouth on flats
They’re getting ill and they’re getting fat

THIS WORLD IS SO IN-SAAAAAAANE,
I CAN JUST SAY: GODDAMN!
I CAN JUST SAY: GODDAMN!
I CAN JUST SAY: GODDAMN!


LIKE YOU

And I try…
to lose my mind!
I think about it…
all the time!

And I feel…
nothing at all!
I would be so helpless,
if I fall!

If I faaall, if I faaaaal…
If I faaall, if I faaaaall!!!!

I need, somebody,
to help me with my sorrows!
I need,
someone like you!!!

And you think,
I’d be so strong.
But if I am faithful,
I just don’t get along!


LITTLE THINGS

You hurry from place to place,
You have no break.
You need your time, need your soul,
start to emancipate!

You don’t feel clever, you don’t feel good.
You set great store by misunderstood. <(Could you please rephrase? I'm sorry I don't understand what you're trying to say)
You’ve got everything,
And you’ve got nothing, too!

No matter, what you think.
Important are the the little things.
- Take care of that, what's near to you!

It’s not the gigantic gifts or words,
that are worth your time.
It is the little things in life,
that make you smile!


WAIT

art consists of inventing always something new
there are always several ways to your goal

find your way, find your way
find your way, find your way, find your way........

what you need is an ingenious idea lying deep in your brain (gain)
i'm trying and i'm thinking but i can't kill the pain
it makes no difference how long it still takes...
and what i know is that I can wait!

art is inexplicably and not for sale (inexplicable)
you have to feel it now or you will fail

Do what u want, do what u want, do what u want....


I DONT KNOW

You are weak enough, for everything u do,
you telling all the stuff, I call u just a fool. (Might rephrase "you telling all the stuff")

Im strong enough for everything u do,
u play with another games, you play things so cool!

I dont know, i have to do, you are just, just a fool
I dont know i have to do, to do, to dooooooo!


HISTORY

We've grown up in a bitter world,
your shoud for help, wont be heard!
Everybody's depressed by his own story,
nobody thinks about times of glory

History, rest in peace!
future comes, the past is free!
to be approved, cause u cant change,
change the world - right here, right now!

That life gave to all of us,
we just got on thing, in wich we trust!
Thats our will, faith n hope,
faith n hope.....

Now i'm lying in my bed,
and thinking with my over loading head!
how nice could it be,
if I'm free, if I'm free!!!

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Other than those small possible errors it looks like you've done well!
Good luck again.




Sh!Za

Location: Right here

Post Thu Dec 09, 2010 9:22 am   Reply with quote         


wooow, again thank you very much! this helps me a lot!!
pm me, if you have problems with german lyrics! Very Happy Very Happy




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