MonkeeDrummer wrote:
So once again, I look to the wizards of PSC for some opinions. The theme is: "life is better with art in it"? I'm not done yet, but I'm not sure where to go from here. Let me know what you think of it so far.
Full Res is 3300X5100 so some detail is lost, but you get the idea.
Ok....here it comes. It's boring. Boring is good for the black and white side but the color
side needs to look like a wonderland like when Dorothy steps into munchkin land. Not that you need
dwarfs and witches but something special about it. Something to make you say Wow.
The person in the picture looks like he could give a shit less about his situation. He should be entering the color wold like he just walked into the playboy mansion and was greeted by a sea of hot naked women. Or, for the youngens, he should look like he just stepped into Willy Wonkas Chocolate factory! Put some passion in it. It's about color! Lose the black bar behind the type.
Don't put a solid color either. At least make it a gradient. Nothing stagnant.
The idea is good. The execution is weak. I am just talking to you like I would someone who works for me. Forgive me.
Right now the rainbow behind the type is all I see. The color side of the world should be what I am looking at. It should overpower the rainbow thingy.
The theme is " Life is Better". Well judging by the kids expression, it doesn't look any better.
Put a hooker and a crackhead in the gray part, put a beautiful group of women plaing volleyball on the beach in the color side. (just an idea) Do ya know what I mean?