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Post Sat May 20, 2006 4:03 pm   Reply with quote         


I appreciate all the great advice I've been getting and I have one last image I would like to have critiqued... at least for a while.. Thanks in advance.

http://www.greatyellowpageads.us/IMAGES/viperfrogtest.jpg




mikey

Location: Somerville MA

Post Sat May 20, 2006 4:23 pm   Reply with quote         


Laughing Cool creation!




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Post Sat May 20, 2006 4:26 pm   Reply with quote         


Thanks, do you see anything that I could do to improve..




ScionShade

Location: VeniceFlaUS

Post Sat May 20, 2006 6:03 pm   Reply with quote         


Needs a victim-- a freak fly with a bropken wing?




BroChris

Location: Louisville, KY

Post Sat May 20, 2006 6:04 pm   Reply with quote         


Great job!
billtvshow
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Location: North Carolina

Post Sat May 20, 2006 10:38 pm   Reply with quote         


Agree with scion, right now it's a bit bland.
Specifically, the contrast of the horns do not match the scene with the frog. You need to increase the contrast on those, maybe even reduce the brightness a tiny bit as well. Also, the teeth are sharper on the edges than the edges of the frog in the frog image, so they don't really blend in. I would recommend taking the blur tool, choose a small brush, smaller than the width of the teeth, set the pressure to about 5-10% and brush over the edges of the teeth to make the edges just the tiniest bit fuzzier. That way, you maintain the quality and detail of the inner parts of the teeth, but make the edges match the edge crispness of the frog image.
ScionShade

Location: VeniceFlaUS

Post Sat May 20, 2006 11:01 pm   Reply with quote         


That's a good critique.




nevet

Location: Israel>Vancouver

Post Sun May 21, 2006 3:14 am   Reply with quote         


Laughing
funny dude......
just one thing about the horns, one horn seem to be in front of the other.... i don't know if thats intentional but to me it seems like they should be in the same line.....




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Post Sun May 21, 2006 7:49 am   Reply with quote         



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Post Sun May 21, 2006 8:36 am   Reply with quote         


excellent! Very Happy




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