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Fri Nov 10, 2006 9:19 am Reply with quote
Well, maybe it is, but that's not why I'm posting this.
My entry in looking down did not do as well as I thought it would. For me that's a first time (most of the times I'm basically right about my perspectives).
Anyway, since the people who did vote for it had no remarks and noone left a comment suggesting what could have been better, I'm clueless of what's not right with it.
So, my question is simple:
Why did you not vote for it (or what could have been done better).
ps: this is the image: Crashed
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yello_piggy
Location: Vienna/Austria/Europe
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 9:57 am Reply with quote
I didn't vote in this contest at all because of absence. but it is worth a vote anyway.
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 10:17 am Reply with quote
Less than Zero wrote: If the firetruck sat at the same angle as the ambulance that would have done it for me..Nice job anyway
actually, I took this in consideration but I had the same thought as Tofu (as he mentions in his comment http://photoshopcontest.com/view-entry/108726/votes.html here).
On the other hand, now I think about it, maybe the airplane isn't correctly angled now...
thanks for the advice
@yello_piggy: thanks
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patim
Location: Netherlands
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 1:24 pm Reply with quote
The perspective of both the cars and the plane are a bit of. And there is to much smoke in the line of sight, so the picture isn't very clear. You could think about letting the smoke flow more sideways of the plain.
For accuracy, you could have put some debris lying around
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 1:39 pm Reply with quote
I wasn't sure, but something about the angles weren't settling right for me. I didn't leave a comment because I couldn't put my finger on what could be changed. I looked at it for quite some time trying to figure out what was bothering me to no avail. Great idea though, and good job really.
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mikey
Location: Somerville MA
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 1:45 pm Reply with quote
You got 15 votes! I got 4 dont feel so bad!
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patim
Location: Netherlands
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 1:47 pm Reply with quote
I've tried to draw the perspective of the plane and the ambulance in your picture. As you can see, it makes the flames wrong also, cause you'd see them on top
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Eve
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Location: Planet Earth
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 1:52 pm Reply with quote
I see dozens of votes everyday, where people point out some serious or slight imperfections in the chop yet vote for it anyway. Why? I don't know. I like your chop, T. Some of the smoke on the right has a hard edge to it but I like it. It was undervoted, imho.
Ohhhh, nevermind...that's the skid mark!
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patim
Location: Netherlands
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 2:05 pm Reply with quote
Grefix wrote:
So, my question is simple:
Why did you not vote for it (or what could have been done better).
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Sorry...I thought he'd asked some constructive critisism?
My bad
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BroChris
Location: Louisville, KY
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 2:10 pm Reply with quote
bsoholic wrote: I wasn't sure, but something about the angles weren't settling right for me. I didn't leave a comment because I couldn't put my finger on what could be changed. I looked at it for quite some time trying to figure out what was bothering me to no avail. Great idea though, and good job really.
That pretty much sums it up for me too. I do think it was undervoted though now that I look at it again.
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billtvshow
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Location: North Carolina
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 2:40 pm Reply with quote
The angle of the plane felt wrong at first, but then I took a step back and thought, well maybe it could be tilted like that, so that wasn't the issue. But, the angle of the ambulance vs the firetruck is WAY off and that was a killer. Also, there really ought to be more debris from both the plane and the displaced chunks of earth all across the entire scene. Plus there's detail work that was lacking top right, like one of the poles is overlapped slightly by the dirt crash path and there's a shadow from something that is no longer there. It wasn't far from a vote at all, but the ambulance thing was pretty big.
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FootFungas
Location: East Coast!
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 2:43 pm Reply with quote
The perspective is insanely messed up. The ambulance is Off.
And what is billowing from the plane at the right hand side?
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Micose
Location: Quebec (CAN) & France
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Fri Nov 10, 2006 3:50 pm Reply with quote
guys , u just have to image the truch an ambulance are on little hills in the grass,it would change perspective..;well its what i usually think about grass....
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