| all source... perspective and lighting trial. suggestions welcomed. thanx ;) * updated per suggestions * thanx ;) |
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cherylm329
Hmm, I am not perfect when it comes to figuring out shading and perspective, but I think the shadow would be longer and softer, the orange looks like it isn't sitting, but floating. Here is a visual http://artsillustration.com/ball4.JP
Hope that helps :)
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Martrex
There is no tie for it to the once wall now floor. maybe a faint circular second shadow there to ground it. Also lite hits center yet shadow to right? ; { )
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manic_d
reminds me of Posh Spice
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caprix3
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Heinlein
:)
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Soze
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TresDEE
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gsenthil
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annajon
In that light the bottom part of the orange seems to be having too much dark shadow, I would have used darker orange or brown colour to shade that part of the fruit
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Granulated
right... main problem...the white (or light grey, what have you) tiles would reflect more light than the orange.
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
good points to all, thanks for the advice i'll work on it and update ;)
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
i updated per suggestions may have too refresh browser if you don't see the reflections ;)
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Granulated
when i said the tiles would reflect more light I didnt mean the a more intense reflection of the orange was needed, I meant that they should simply be brighter. As it stands, if we accept the reflective attributes the the shadow would almost disappear.
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Granulated
THe reflection of the orange would always be less intense than the actual orange. Even on a perfect 100% reflective surface it would only be the of equal intensity.
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Granulated
the perspecive 'rake' of the tile surface should be lowered a fair amount
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Granulated
The strangely over bright light dot on the orange is erroneous. I'm pretty sure you couldnt make that happen (IRL) even using a flash gun at really close range
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
andy thanks for your help w/ my pm's. i think this is a lost cause and my psd file is a mess and i don't think this is worth trying to salvage a 3rd time ;)
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
thanks for the votes and comments and help ;)
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by NOGOODSK8RPUNK
Created April 01, 2008
8 votes
10 comments
1280w x 960h (428KB)
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