| 2nd version: slightly more bkgd blur & better hat shadow. (Thanks to MB for the critique.) |
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Govan
CLASSIC ROCK and DESSERTED (!) EXTRA. I ♥ your humour
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mellowdesign
Thanks guys! It's good to be here :oD
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Mira
Funna and still stylish. Nice one
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mellowdesign
Hey Marco - cheers for comments. What would u suggest? M :o)
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marcoballistic
well the seagull is out of focus on the hill that is in focus, for me since the focal point is the 2 figures, the background should have a progressive focal depth, so maybe match the hill/rocks and some of the beach and sea to same blur level...
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marcoballistic
...also the hat on the right figure needs a little shadow under it,and maybe due to light source angle a little shading under the arms and in creases more to give the figures more rounded and real look. But as it is, it is a great and fun piece...
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marcoballistic
...your choice if you wish to update it :)
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manic_d
nice
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mellowdesign
Thanks MB! You can see an attempt at shadow under the hat...!! The seagull I blurred to fit it into the pic better...but if I've time I'll have a rethink - thanks for your comments - appreciate it!
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marcoballistic
good updates Mellow, looking good
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marcoballistic
and congrats on the 3rd place, 13 entries and first placed entry, not too bad at all :)
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
well done grats on the 3rd ;)
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by mellowdesign
Created April 14, 2008
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