| Ok. Thanks Shaman, Evaa, and Candron for all the advise. I think this image came along way today. Here is update 6,431 |
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candron
much better, i love all the colour works and the scene is very good well done
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TheShaman
I like the doll
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Eve
You taking lighting lessons from Marco? ;p There should be some lighintg on doll and she's cast a shadow to the viewer's LEFT.
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Janfet
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anabe
good colors, overall scene
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mastermason
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val_ad
this is good chop nat! just work a bit on shadows.
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TJ
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captainSMITTY11
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mike.b.
hey ill vote for something thats been upd8ted 6431 times..lol..i really like this..didnt see it eariler ..but hey i like it now:)
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nunosk8
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Tonto
pale face good
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Martrex
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
didn't see the previous version but this is cool the scary guy in the b/g is creepy... love the moon ;)
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tadams
Strangely good. Maybe less saturation on the planet/moon. Seems like you could get rid of the bearded one.
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TheShaman
Eves sorta right.... I think the way that shadow is on the left chair rest, the doll shadow would fall on the floor. Being that the back part of the shadow shown is from the back cushion, and the more close shadow is of the right chair rest.
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TheShaman
but there should be some sort of white(ish) highlight on the dolls head, or at least in her hair.
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Eve
refer to Claf's image. Anything sitting on the chair would cast a shadow on the viewer's left armrest.
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TheShaman
correct me if I'm wrong... but the light is coming from 2 ish on a clock. It would have to be coming directly from the right at 3:00 to cast a shadow on to the left arm rest. The way I see it, shadow in q should fall off the cushion and onto the floor...
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TheShaman
I'm using the shadows already on the floor as my guide. they run from 2ish to what 8ish? as for the large kid shadow.. try lowering its opacity and use the shadows on the floor to guide you on their paths. they should be much browner less black as well.
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TheShaman
Claf's image has a very large object on couch... Filling the whole thing. So yes, some shadow would be cast on that rest... This doll is small, and is sitting on the edge of this cushion. So I don't think the same shadow would be cast in this case.
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Salvezza
I just ran out of votes, so sorry..this is really good. :)
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nat_g31
Eve- LOL. Your verbal abuse it extremely funny, until it is aimed at me! Thanks for the advise, I put a shadow there but I will look at it closer later. Shaman- Thanks for the time.
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Eve
GAH! Nat, please, you think my comment was abusive? Well, maybe for MARCO, ;P but not for you....c'mon, it was constructive only. I LUV YOU, MAN!!!
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nat_g31
I know Eve, it is truly appreciated. Don't worry, I'm not made of glass.
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TheShaman
nice update bro!
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nat_g31
Thanx Shaman. Yay, more votes then comments, oops I just made it a tie!
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Remnant of a Broken Home
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by nat_g31
Created August 11, 2008
20 votes
12 comments
1153w x 816h (466KB)
1,734 views
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