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ReyRey
It's really hard to tell what is going on here. I'm sure it makes sense to you because it was your idea, but I can't figure it out. Are we supposed to be looking down on this??? Is it in the water??? If it is then the tree reflection is too strong.
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ReyRey
I think I see fish below the trees..? No? is there a hole in the middle of the plant?? Or is there a fish stuck in it? It took me a while ti figure out that it was a fish. There is no real light source here or point of focus so my eye doesn't know where
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ReyRey
to go. It is very confusing, and most people will not spend time trying to figure it out. I'm sure the idea seemed cool and it still can but this image is not working.
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Azionite
OK, I was going for a swamp type image. I made the leaves of the plant and in the middle was an open cup. So, I stuck a fish in it. Not sure how the fish would've gotten there. What I was hoping for was more of an experiment with the water and it
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Azionite
seems that didn't come across too well. So, how can I make the swamp/water look better??! Thanks for tips/critiques. I don't mind honest/hard critiques, so bring 'em! :)
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ReyRey
Drop the opacity of the tree reflection way down. Show some of the leaves on the plant under water. Make the middle part with the fish bigger so we can see it. Look at some pond images!!! Look at how the water looks when it is touching the plant.
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On The Pond
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by Azionite
Created February 01, 2010
3 votes
6 comments
1280w x 960h (508KB)
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