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theduplicate
a little too much difference from the point of view? no ?
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a4pawedpal
FIVE!!! ahem, er fore!
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Bluesbro
Perhaps a shadow ... althoug I really don't see an obvious angle of light from the background, but yo figure there would be some. ALooks like a right to left accourding to the ball. You did a nice job 'grounding' the golfer though, and golf rocks :-)
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blue_lurker
Ok Pat thats a $50 fine, and you will have to go back and replace your divits...
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zaiba
neat
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anmazondi
The idea is very good,but the point of wiev.. I think is a little wrong.
Try this..transform first the background with Ctrl+T ->Perspective and
the put the foreground.Anyway..the idea is GENIAL.
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ronni3264
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Serps
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L-dawg
neat idea
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supak0ma
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billtvshow
golf vote
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Lobotomized
looks good
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kees
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velocity
Well done
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DoctorWu
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irishstu
I'm very impressed with this Pat. I can see a lot of attention to detail.... blurred background, shadows, "grounding of the feet" (as the very wise Bluesbro put it). The fact that you thought about all of these details shows how much you are improving. Now it's about honing those skills, like the rounded shadow as it goes over a round object, etc. WELL DONE!
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siem
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flyman
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Patre
I decided to give this a shot borrowing a page out of Anfa's book...
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Patre
You might be right Matt, I was never sure myself..The background might benefit from being a little higher, but I honestly am uncertain...
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Patre
or the background might recede more effectively if it were lower...
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DoctorWu
The golf ball is oblong, try transform and round it out.....FORE!
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Patre
Thanks Bluesbro and Dr. Wu...I made the changes you suggested to the best of my ability...
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a4pawedpal
there isn't any real definition of which way, or side that the light is coming from, if you look at the ball for it, you see his leg shadowing over it, but if you look at the club's shadow, it goes betwixt the legs, so this golfer may be trying to knock o
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Patre
Golf club shadow adjusted-Thanks a4pawed pal..
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supak0ma
patre, if u look at the statue and trees in bg, u see light comes from top/right, plus the shadow would make a curve on the ball, the light on trousers is correct, only bad looking thing is the shadow..good job
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Patre
Thanks Supakoma for those tips. I made the adjustments....
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[untitled entry]
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by Patre
Created December 13, 2004
18 votes
9 comments
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