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jalfaro
Location: Stockton CA
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 Fri Mar 10, 2006 1:28 am Reply with quote
This is not done yet, far from it... but there is something missing, perhaps composition? or perhaps the mood should be changed to a night? evening? what do you guys think...need opinions- I was going to post this for the upcoming "budding Tree" pic but I enjoyed working on it so much I think Im going to keep it for my portfolio,...so give me your opinions guys, much appreciated!!!!!
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Synthvet
Location: Oregon
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Fri Mar 10, 2006 3:30 am Reply with quote
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yello_piggy
Location: Vienna/Austria/Europe
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Fri Mar 10, 2006 8:01 am Reply with quote
in my opinion there is some chrome and metal-look missing, and you should spend some minutes on her right hand
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jalfaro
Location: Stockton CA
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Fri Mar 10, 2006 11:09 am Reply with quote
Thanks, what about the composition? where does your eye end up?
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ReyRey
Location: In a world of $#!t
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Fri Mar 10, 2006 11:41 am Reply with quote
The comp seems fine but you won't really know until you fix the hand (like piggy said) beacause that is where the eye goes. The eye catches that something is wrong and goes right to that angle where the hand crosses the bike. Fix that and I think you will find that the comp does not bother you as much.
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mikey
Location: Somerville MA
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Fri Mar 10, 2006 11:54 am Reply with quote
Post it again and make it smaller" it takes up too much space. great idea! work on the hand and re post it" and we can go from there. I like your artwork! ~ 
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jalfaro
Location: Stockton CA
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Fri Mar 10, 2006 4:17 pm Reply with quote
appreciate the comments guys thanks, Ill post it again tonight. Im doing part of my Sci fi portfolio as " Exotic chicks and Exotic Bikes" theme --thanks again
sorry about the size, didnt realize it was that big when I first posted it
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jalfaro
Location: Stockton CA
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Sun Mar 12, 2006 11:13 pm Reply with quote
here it is, the final composition, What do you guys think?
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mikey
Location: Somerville MA
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 12:02 am Reply with quote
I think it looks great! ~ I just happened to be here when you uploaded it" Colors, idea lighting, movement, concept and originality is quite good jalfaro" very well done! your a great artist! 
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 1:59 am Reply with quote
Awesome job. Looks really great.
The only thing I'm not digging is the ground texture.
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jalfaro
Location: Stockton CA
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 11:06 am Reply with quote
Yeah, I wasnt completely happy with the ground either, but I originally based the whole thing on that ground, so I left it in there. I was going to apply a median to it, but then when I post it up everyone is going to wonder where the source is at..(budding tree) it was either this one or a pic of insana binladden poking his neck trough a hole in the ground with the little tree at the top of his head-tough choice
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 11:32 am Reply with quote
Everything looks really good! The lighting/shading is very nice.
Only thing I don't like is the hand. It still looks like a foot. Not resting on the bike realistically. Otherwise, I think it looks great!
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Meaty
Location: cheshire/uk
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 7:35 pm Reply with quote
Looks great, not sure im that fussed on the cape though, the original you posted without the cape looked a bit better in my opinion. Lighting is good but i think the boob shadow is a little too dark compared with the rest of the shadows. also i think her inside of her leg could do with a bit of shadow also. Very nice job though.
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Micose
Location: Quebec (CAN) & France
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 7:42 pm Reply with quote
you should not post works like this man,it's too big, it's kinda risky somehow to put jpegs this size on the net. Good work.
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jalfaro
Location: Stockton CA
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Mon Mar 13, 2006 9:01 pm Reply with quote
What do you mean -risky- Micose?, like somebody stealing it risky?
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