OK, here goes...I was gonna post this in the "Marx is Here" thread but I figured it already had enough pages so I'm starting a new thread. Some of you will probably consider this to be in poor taste and that's ok. To each his own! Anyway I took one of the pics from Marx's intro and added a little sumpin-sumpin!

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Any critiques-comments-gripes welcome as always

Will E, he put a big bulls eye on his back for sure

i can't see the pics

not too bad some major probs one being a face coming out of the recent bullet hole made in the screen..

the font used on the labels are also incorrect need fixing
label maker fonts online should help ya
otherwise...
Although agreed on the bad taste thing.
concept is good has a clear message.

Pretty good

Whats wrong with the face? As for the text,its the closest font I have! Thanks anyway though!

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Will :

what ya mean that text is the close-est...

http://www.acme.com/labelmaker/

that link should help you with your font type in somik and copy paste. saves hard drive space or look up the dyno fonts...

and i never seen a face come out of a tv screen which is still semi functional. y aknow the whole electron gun to phosphur dot thing going on in there...

What is wrong with the face? Yes Will asked for a critique, but this is pretty damn good. I personally think its pretty fly, and I prefer the text to the manhunt one, as Will has taken the time to make the blood look alot more real, with dried areas. It isn't too red and cartoony.

So basically big up Will, nice work bud

Yeah...I "could" say something, but I'm playing 'goodcop' this week.
So here's some positive carp for ya.
It looks like a tv screen.....IF you happen to be riding the internet inspired art-styles wagon.
Joe-Blo "me" would never have guessed that was a tv screen.
Ya seem to have a pretty fair grasp of PS, I'd think
you would do well to block out all the internet interference and
not let 'it' direct you where to go with your choppin'.
You "marx-man'" seem to have a pretty brazen attitude...I'd like to see you use it and make stuff that's completely you.
Good Luck.

Scion, you know I love you like an e-brother but...Joe-Blo "me" would like to know...

WHAT. THE. BLOODY. HELL. DID. YOU. JUST. SAY.

???

he said beautiful work Will

hey marco? was there something in our vote alliance information package that said you could answer questions that I have directed at another member?

I think NOT!

...but...with that said...perhaps you are right.
I think I need confirmation tho.

yeah..I said Nice work Will.
Kinda a break through really...
A suave combination of existant interweb tripe combined with b-movie cynisism with the express purpose of
intercultural advancement in the face..the FACE of adversity.
A notch above the typical Portuguese examplification of resorting to name calling..stuff like...FROG FACE!