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armogeden

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Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 5:06 pm   Reply with quote         


Smile got bored. looks ok to me Smile would appreciate any feedback


http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/7523/lipspl0.jpg




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mason4300

Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 5:11 pm   Reply with quote         


it looks great, but the underside of the bottom lip sort of makes it look like it's floating and not attached. Overall, it's good




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armogeden

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Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 6:20 pm   Reply with quote         


thanks ill make sure i get round to changing it. ver good point




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ScionShade

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Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 6:23 pm   Reply with quote         


I hate relating one person's work to anothers, but
if ya look at mezopunk's port-
you'll see how similar her style is to this.
Everyone loves that style.
the burning couch

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Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 7:53 pm   Reply with quote         


Looks Great armo*!* I love vector works!
MindGraph

Location: Augusta, Georgia

Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:01 pm   Reply with quote         


mason4300 wrote:
it looks great, but the underside of the bottom lip sort of makes it look like it's floating and not attached. Overall, it's good


I think it's great vector work...nice look to it and the coloring is great. I do agree with mason though if you had either a darker shadow area or something to attach the lips a little more to the face. Looks more correct from a distance than close up.
I like it alot! wish I could pull that off




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MindGraph

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Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:06 pm   Reply with quote         


looking at it more it looks like your shadow under the lip might work if you brought it over to the right of the lip more??
not sure but maybe




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FootFungas

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Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:27 pm   Reply with quote         


Very nice vector, I see what theyr'e saying about it looking a little detachted.
I like the way the lips look realistic while still keeping it simple.
DigitalThug

Location: Bristol, UK

Post Sat Sep 23, 2006 8:50 pm   Reply with quote         


Yeah I reckon if you make the shading under the bottom lip smaller and move it more to the right I reckon it'll definitely improve. All in my humble opionion though and what do I know!
armogeden

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Post Sun Sep 24, 2006 5:38 am   Reply with quote         


thanks for the feedback. i updated the picture, does it look ok now?

thanks Very Happy
tom




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DigitalThug

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Post Sun Sep 24, 2006 6:43 am   Reply with quote         


Definitely an improvement mate!

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