Wed Jul 25, 2007 12:36 pm Reply with quote
The others have already mentioned the obvious. Technically motion blur might be correct but it depends on car speed, shutter speed, aperture, and ISO. Something has been lost in blurring the rats. But, blur could work under different scenarios. The rats could be sharp, but not against the current blurred background. Desaturating the rats as Rey pointed out will help a lot. They're great looking but too pretty, rough 'em up. Composition seems to suffer from where you've placed them and why did you choose to make them the size they are? Why not go bigger. What's the story? Why are they there? What are they doing? Where are they going? Do they carry baggage? Are you trying to be funny? Is it one of those, "whoa, what the hell was that" moments.