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TheShaman
heres my suggestions. 1. the planet as is, is only half a planet. the darkside of it should not have stars, it should be black to complete a circle. 2. for the tank, the lighting should match the planet. ;)
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marcoballistic
as Sean points out the stars from the darkside of the earth need to go, also the surface of the moon at the bottom of the scene needs more light to match earth. One morething to consider may be to lessen the amount of stars, it is a busy.
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mike.b.
update comming sit tite guys....ill vote when i return PROMISE..lol i just got to fix this
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mike.b.
i kno its not PERFECT but hey i tried ..and im tired ..stayed up all night ..cause i missed choppin..and wanted to do the tank in space...give me some time and ill get better ...with the help of you PSC'ers:)
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TheShaman
:D
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mike.b.
so it must not be too bad if i got a :D from tha planet man...
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TheShaman
fear not, you're getting there young Jedi.
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zoom
Not one of your best works Mike,though I like it ..the feel for me just isn't there.
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zoom
Not one of your best works Mike..Though I like it ,the feel for it is not there for me
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TheShaman
there must be an echo in space
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marcoballistic
ahhh but in space, no on can hear you cream
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marcoballistic
bwaaaa ha ha haaa what an unfortunate typo that was lol
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mike.b.
tbc thank you.....ive invested a lil too much time into this to update again right away ...but i might be able to fix things a lil tomorrow:) cheers and thank you for your comment and suggestion ..thats wat i was looking for:)
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Goat1981
Eh. I know what its like to put a lot of work in and not get as many votes. Keep practicing and you'll get faster. The "experts" here fail to realize that some of us are relative beginners!
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mike.b.
thanks goat....i just want to learn ...ill take this into consideration ..and write everything in notepad ..all suggestions ...and use them to hone my skills.. thanks for all comments and suggestions ..and ALL helpers
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