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TheShaman
not quite alone....
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Miss SS
Loads of little extras - what a chilling story this tells... but I love it!
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marcoballistic
love the sealed doors, and the repair work is solid if you hit it big, think some of the shadows would be darker and a little sharper, but I nearly crud my pants while looking around this image, superb emotional and atmospheric work
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annajon
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Granulated
lovely
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TofuTheGreat
Oddly disturbing. Like a bad dream or acid trip.
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pollyO
Eerie vote! Fav'd
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solaris80
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nat_g31
Good work and feel overall, though I am not crazy about the externel used.
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Stewie4lb
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ReyRey
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candron
smile, well done
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CarlC
surreal, well done.
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kinetic_be
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seelcraft
Nice picture.
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Eve
Great work on the source...nice additions of externals.
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Heinlein
Great work, and listen to Rey Rey. He is a great help on this site :)
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geronslc
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
hanging person in the back was a cool touch ;)
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Salvezza
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anabe
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rockyjob
excelent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! faved!
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mikey
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draugaer
great work, very creepy, especially the main girl
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billtvshow
This is hardcore.
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mastermason
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Wiz
"Nice lighting, but the figures legs and feet need a shadow under the chair... fix that and it's a TEN!"
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Serps
Nice work
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digitalpharaoh
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Cartoon Contractor
Nice, cool stuff!
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val_ad
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TJ
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captainSMITTY11
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Claf
Very nice! Great colors. :)
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mike.b.
the face in the spotlight is amazing....everything about the atmosphere is just chilling...love this ..
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bigbuck
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Ravelant
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Mel47
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blue_lurker
With the photo realism in the background and with the chair, the girl looks out of place to me. What got ya the vote is the subtle use of your externals and the face in the light IMO with out the girl would make this a more chilling image. Nice work.
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A.G.L
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ThePec
I'm loving this!
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nunosk8
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ReggieNoble2
So good.
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Goat1981
Exceptional, Thijs. :-D Love the mood and all of the little details.
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sirenka
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the burning couch
Great stuff*! I like the little details like the particles in the light beam & exposed chair arm innards.
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macksmax
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Gort
creepy and cool
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gbrmzrs
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yello_piggy
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Martrex
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lancoma
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Netwel
Cool!
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caprix3
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tadams
Wonderfully weird. Great update from the dark original. Keep in mind that although the light is hitting the child and the chair, it would not light the back of the room in the same way.
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Lord David
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Tesore
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Micose
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candron
how can a spotlight , lightning the background behind the girls head?
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Sjitske
Good point ron, I adjusted slightly head lighting. But mainly the head of the girl. The back ground is lit because it shines over head. ;)
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ReyRey
I love the scene. The light that is hitting here needs to effect the chair a bit more as bright as it is hitting her head. The beam of light , to me, looks like it is coming from behind her on the left side yet the shadow under the chair is from
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ReyRey
a light source in front of the chair. Still very much worth a vote.
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ReyRey
a light source in front of the chair. Still very much worth a vote.
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ReyRey
If these items were fixed, this would be a winner for me. ( I think she is pooping her pants. That's what my son looks like when he is going. hahahah)
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Sjitske
Yup Rey u r right... Changed and hopefully better ;)
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ReyRey
Yep, Better.. But the shadow under the chair is still going in the wrong direction.
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ReyRey
[img] i20.photobucket.com... I set up a quick model to replicate your image: [img] i20.photobucket.com...
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ReyRey
It's hard to tell...Is the light coming from in front of her??? or behind her??? If it is behind her, then the light would not be hitting the back cushion. If it is in front of her then the light would not be hitting the back of Her left arm.
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ReyRey
Sorry for so many comments. It's easier if you just quickly set up something with a light the way you want it and then replicate that. Ya know what I mean?
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ReyRey
If this was a job, I would quickly sit my child in a chair and set up a light and take a photo so I get the lighting and shadow right. Sometimes it is really hard to imagine correctly in your head.
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Sjitske
The more comments the marrier Rey ;) cuz they're useful. the light is coming from front (bit left) centre. If it is from behind then here face etc.. should be darkened...right? :) guess the chair is too lighted on the left side. At the moment no one
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Sjitske
arround to use as a guinea pig for lighting. but u r right that's the best way to check cuz it is difficult to do it from the top of my head. gonna give it a shot again to fix it. ;)
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Sjitske
p.s THNX for the help again ;)
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kinetic_be
Really usefull tips to read here in the comment-section! Thx
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JORDAN792
I LIKE THE FACE IN THE LIGHT
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the burning couch
I was think'n it might look better if the light beam wasn't so tapered. As it is, it would be the size of a pin-hole at that ceiling height.
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ReyRey
I was think the same thing BC. It would help show that the light is in front of her.
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Sjitske
Umh you guys mean that the lightbundle at the top is too narrow? should I broaden it up? ;) don't exactly know what you mean?
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the burning couch
Yeah..in short "widen the beam" mostly at the top. This would also make the light more effective ,I think.
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candron
grats mate
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Tonto
congrats pale face
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Heinlein
Congrats on win number 6! Excellent work!
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Sjitske
THNX ron, tonto and jim! ;)
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Sjitske
THNX ron, tonto and jim! ;)
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TJ
congrats.
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mikey
Congats! beautiful artwork, fav'd!
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Tesore
Goed bezig! Weer een prachtexmplaar... van harte :-)
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ReyRey
Congrats!!!!!
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Sjitske
Another update ;) Altered a bit the spot light and added the feet to the chair shadow! THNX all! for the good comments. esp. Rey for helping me to make it a better chop! ;) CHRS!
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tadams
Congrats on the win. I'm sorry to say, but I think the lighting was better before this very last update. It now appears to be coming in at an angle from behind. The light hitting her appears to be coming from slightly in front to her right.
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marcoballistic
so glad this won, brilliant feel to it
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Martrex
Congrats!
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
grats on yet another fine win ;)
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anabe
congrats on another great win!
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Granulated
:D
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Goat1981
Great win, Thijs! Way to be a good sport about all the light critics. :) Congrats on #6!
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Sjitske
Thnx guys! ;) And thanks Kris, nobody is ever good enough, not to learn or not taking critics ;) it helps you develop :D CHRS
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Wiz
"Nice Win S!"
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pollyO
Well deserved win!! Congrats :)
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the burning couch
Good goin*!*
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ReinMan
Really neat work! Congrats on a well deserved win! :D
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Micose
grats!
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mike.b.
you are tha man...indeed..congrats
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