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Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 3:51 pm   Reply with quote         


Hello guys back once more with a new image
now i wanted a round temple with no pillars or at least a big round flat rock but failed to find what i needed , but i managed to end up with this


there is a variation for this with no clouds underneath the stairs i dont know if its better .
anyway , initially i wanted to put a model into it with some wings and an angelic figure i let you help me decide if i will

also maybe i will upload a painted version of this
these are externals used :

Nebula : http://ineedfire.deviantart.com/art/Nebula-Effects-Fractal-Stock-116324836
SKy: http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://www.imgbase.info/images/safe-wallpapers/photography/sky/17212_sky_clouds_above_clouds.jpg
Temple: http://fuguestock.deviantart.com/art/Greek-Temple-Mock-317873927?q=boost%3Apopular%20greek%20temple&qo=27
Stairs : http://fav.me/d4v0dso

as for the planets they were made by me if you need to use them notify me so i can upload it for you peace Smile




TheShaman

Location: Peaksville, Southeast of Disorder

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 4:09 pm   Reply with quote         


Before I continue... do you want my honest critique or just the typical... "wow that's really nice" type reach around?




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Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 4:11 pm   Reply with quote         


if you feel its cool say it
and if you have some notices go ahead




anfa

Location: Geordieland, UK

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 4:16 pm   Reply with quote         


TheShaman wrote:
Before I continue... do you want my honest critique or just the typical... "wow that's really nice" type reach around?

Say it!! Laughing




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TheShaman

Location: Peaksville, Southeast of Disorder

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 4:33 pm   Reply with quote         


I'm not drunk yet so I'll be nice.
The idea is cool BUT
It needs a lot of work still. Your temple is really fuzzy. Looks like you used the eraser tool.

If this temple is on a planet, then there should be some type of atmosphere... thus the other planets should be out of focus. As is... they seem too close to the temple. if you know what i mean...

could use some clouds going up the stairs. theres this cool brush you could use... don't have the time right now...

more later unless Anfa would like to continue...




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charliesou

Location: Independent Scotland

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 4:46 pm   Reply with quote         


TheShaman wrote:
Before I continue... do you want my honest critique or just the typical... "wow that's really nice" type reach around?


My blubbery jowls are rippling with mirth !!
Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing




anfa

Location: Geordieland, UK

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 5:18 pm   Reply with quote         


TheShaman wrote:
I'm not drunk yet so I'll be nice.
The idea is cool BUT
It needs a lot of work still. Your temple is really fuzzy. Looks like you used the eraser tool.

If this temple is on a planet, then there should be some type of atmosphere... thus the other planets should be out of focus. As is... they seem too close to the temple. if you know what i mean...

could use some clouds going up the stairs. theres this cool brush you could use... don't have the time right now...

more later unless Anfa would like to continue...

The full thing just looks flat to me.




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anfa

Location: Geordieland, UK

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 5:29 pm   Reply with quote         


I wish i could be more constructive but due to the time difference, I'm a lot more drunk than Sean (I'm passed thinking logical).




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kinetic_be

Location: Belgium

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:03 pm   Reply with quote         


Yes, it's missing depth.

The idea is good, but it needs a lot of work.
What could help is making cleaner edges. It looks like a lot of elements were masked out using a large brush.
It doesn't have to be too sharp though, but because everything is fuzzy around the edges, you don't get a depth of field.
If you like the cloudy-effect around your bushes or stairs, try using mist. This can easily be done by making a selection with the lasso tool, set your feather range to 10-15 and make selections where you want to have mist. Then fill it with white or a very light color and play with the opacity.




charliesou

Location: Independent Scotland

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:30 pm   Reply with quote         


anfa wrote:
I wish i could be more constructive but due to the time difference, I'm a lot more drunk than Sean (I'm passed thinking logical).


Ya Geordie ppooof !!
ppooff...fuck it man..
Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy




anfa

Location: Geordieland, UK

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 6:55 pm   Reply with quote         


charliesou wrote:
anfa wrote:
I wish i could be more constructive but due to the time difference, I'm a lot more drunk than Sean (I'm passed thinking logical).


Ya Geordie ppooof !!
ppooff...fuck it man..
Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

I started early and I bet I'll still be drinking when you are giving it the Zs! lol Laughing




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charliesou

Location: Independent Scotland

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 8:12 pm   Reply with quote         


nnyyugggghhh... Bow




charliesou

Location: Independent Scotland

Post Fri Aug 17, 2012 8:18 pm   Reply with quote         


But I got a hoss for tomorrow...@ N.....y
Cool




Post Sat Aug 18, 2012 12:23 pm   Reply with quote         


back again
i can see what you guys meant , yea i used the erase tool and a mask with large brushe
will clean this up
as for the shaman point of vue of planets i think they are fine




Post Sun Aug 19, 2012 3:58 am   Reply with quote         


EDIT : modification were made to improve the quality of the image , adding light projection




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