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Post Wed May 17, 2006 8:22 am   Reply with quote         


I'm thinking about entering this image in a contest.. please critique.. and be brutal.
http://www.greatyellowpageads.us/IMAGES/comparison.jpg
Thanks

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Post Wed May 17, 2006 8:32 am   Reply with quote         


She looks like she doesnt care shes been speared.
The blood seems too running in too large streams.
The lip line where its stretched looks dramn with pencil.
And what is that behind the fishook? a flower?




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Post Wed May 17, 2006 8:37 am   Reply with quote         


For a contest here? Where?

Brutal critiqe:

1) The blood around the hook is terrible. Placment, color, amount all look too fake.
2) The tear. Tears come from the corners of the eyes not the middle of the eyelid. Also it looks like a burn tool streak and not a tear.
3) What the heck is that reddish/purple/blue thing by the hook? Distracting.
4) The brand name in the corner. Baaaad.
5) The stretching of the face. Look in a mirror and grab the corner of your own mouth then pull it sideways to see what your face does. The whole mouth/lips moves on my face.




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Post Wed May 17, 2006 8:40 am   Reply with quote         


I forgot to mention this is for a contest where some object, person is stretched in an unual, imposible manner. The mouth is suppose to be stretched like it is. I'm going to change a few things like th blood, tear, and do a final crop to remove the text. Thanks for being honest.




jerico

Location: Toronto

Post Wed May 17, 2006 11:52 am   Reply with quote         


poor, poor Uma... Crying or Very sad




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