http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/346/building2nn0.jpg

this is one of the pieces im entering for my art coursework. just thought id post it here because i like all of your feedback

so what do you think?

It be pretty...yarr

What is it for???? Could you post it larger? My honest opinion??... It's nice....The work is clean and well done...but the design??... it's not knocking my socks off. I've seen you do some incredible things before. I'm sorry, but it's just not catching my attention. It needs a point of interest. But then again...WTF do I know?? Sorry for negative feedback. But it is honest. Keep up the good work.

excellent me scurvy sea dogg

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/3153/building2jh2.jpg

heres a larger version

It looks nicer in the larger version but to me it still looks like a really good backgroung for something else. That's why I asked what it was for. If it was for a backdrop then, yes, it's great.

yeah literally just that. i appreciate anything you say good or bad though so thanks

hey, thats looking really good! honestly!

... but i guess that doesn't help you much, does it? therefore the things which would bother me:

1. why are the reflections of the chimneys so straight in the beginning? aint there water?
2. where are the reflections of the other buildings? or is it because of #3:
3. whats that brown stuff in the water (in the middle)? oil? ... if its refl. from the skyline then it doesn't match at all - #1 applies as well
4. is my monitor broken, do i need new eyes or are there all over horizontal stripes (where i would expect a smooth gradient)?
5. who is sitting on the middle chimney? ... err... nevermind...

but don't mind me armo... i'm just whining a bit. if its for background etc. i have to agree with reyrey: very nice pic!

Change the chimney reflections to tall trees and you'll get a mood piece about the memories/reflections of the long lost past taken over by machines

hey$ guiy$s,; iuts great stuiff for a compete y$a jknow
iuts contemporary$,; no need to fuit ruiles of here ,; i thjk uit has good chances Armo.good stuiff

I think Micose hated it? Just kidding

Hey Micose..watch the language there buddy! This is a family sight! No need for your dirty talk!!

rey

yeah, what dunno said your chimney reflects and the rest doesnt.
and a smoother gradient would be less distracting.
I like the gray highlights added to the buildings.
Nice Background.

Translated:


:: (sorry micose but I just had to)

Anyway.....

Armo I do like it but it really reminds me of the contemporary art prints from the 80's. Something an MBA would have hanging on the bright white wall of his condo (with no frame) above the black leather pillowback sofa with the black laquer glass-top end table supporting the ceramic vase loosely filled with 6' long pastel-dyed reeds while a Micheal Bolton song was playing in the background.

I agree with DoubleR that this would be a great backdrop for things.