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ReyRey
This is funny. I know I said I wouldn't, but I gotta. Maybe try rebuilding the nest again. It's a bit smudgy and looks a bit flat. Add some shadow and shading to it to give it shape. It's a great idea but the nest kind of hurts the image. (Don't hurt me)
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creatrix
ReyRey is rigt. It's a cute idea, but the nest looks blurry and flat. I think it has some of the same problems you pointed out on my pool pic yesterday.
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creatrix
very good work on the eye, though.
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ReyRey
It would be cool if you could make a nest out of the feathers of the bird. :o) Just an idea.
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cherylm329
The egg looks too large for that bird in my humble opinion and I agree with Rey about the nest, it doesn't look authentic at all.
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jasper
what is that thing under the egg?
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JClark8220
cherylm329, that's why her eyes are bulging. Get it? It's supposed to be funny.
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Wiz
"I think somebody just laid a 'Turkey' here!' ;-)
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bigbuck
Needs a little something extra in the background. Can I suggest an iced over (cracked) swimming pool with someone diving (not face first) into it....and maybe a rainbow (but not with the sun behind it).
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Salvezza
SQUAWK!!!! Very humorous Julie, needs a lot of refining though.. sorry out of votes..
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BigBadBen
looks very flat. No depth to it at all.
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geeren
A lot of comments, no votes ???
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ReyRey
Much Much better. :o) Oh Crap!! I don't have anymore votes. (Embarrassed) Sorry :( Here is 1 vote.
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JClark8220
I'm just not cut out to be a nest builder!
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
JClark8220 is an alias
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cherylm329
Oh I see. The nest is a little better
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Salvezza
It still looks dull and flat! Sharon's going to fall flat on her face after laying that egg..poor Sharon, she'll have to find a plastic surgeon.. lol
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