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sonu
nice effect
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vokaris
OK, let's try this again: The paper looks crumpled by hand, not paper jammed; a paper jam usually created multiple parallel creases when the paper gets stuck between rollers. The message says "check rear door", yet the paper is in the output tray
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vokaris
The location of the display on the edge of the top cover makes no sense. The lighting is inconsistent, the mouse body is lit from below but casts a shadow. Shadow from printer on paper - light from top left, mouse shadow - light from bottom left.
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vokaris
The thin light edge around the paper makes no sense. The rip at the top - usually only one of the edges is white. The edge between the printed area and the white border is blurry. The grain of the different images (mouse, paper, desk) is inconsistent.
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Luxwiz
have to agree wholeheartedly with vokaris on this one senz ...
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<senzotaku>
Wow vokaris you carp about everything this image had to carp about, bravo! I did some updates at your requests though, I'll guess thats what you tried... I almost putted your thumbnail in the mouse his mouth - but I gave it a better spot, watchtower 1 :
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<senzotaku>
No problem Lux, did some small updates. Some layers where already merged, so I couldn't do everything vokaris said. Btw he didn't do a chop since 2009!? Wow! Sorry vokaris, but STFUAC already... ;)
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Luxwiz
senz... regardless of the last time vokaris chopped here,I would listen to his advice,it will always help you improve,he's one of the better choppers at psc imo ;·)
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Paper jam jam...
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by <senzotaku>
Created April 13, 2015
7 votes
8 comments
1278w x 960h (492KB)
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