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<senzotaku>
Blur the black stripes :D
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Len
thank you that helped the effect.
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Len
I would appreciate comments, so I can make my work better.
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Feral Hamster
it's the wrong kind of smoke...that looks like wispy cigarette smoke. The smoke from a blazing inferno *billows*, like an enormous, puffy black cloud. Also, the flames should be much fuller and less blurry.
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Feral Hamster
Good smoke here: [img] sm5sxl.net... or just do a google search on terms like "house fire."
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Feral Hamster
the smoke looks great...fire is also a huge improvement. (may still wanted to make it brighter and more opaque.)
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Feral Hamster
well heck, as long as I'm making a mess of your comments, you should also add a little more flame and a lot more smoke to the top-floor window...in a real fire, the smoke just really pours out. why a soldier, by the way? is he just passing by, or did he s
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Len
Thank you for all your help.
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ReinMan
Len - good chop. didn't see the Pre-Hamster post, but it seems you've improved your chop on this - congrats. I am sadly out of votes, but you would have got one. Plus, if I'd had time to do so, I'd have also asked about the soldier, as I don't understa
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Len
the soldier has a personal meaning to me. I lost two brothers in the military. The burning house, reminded me of destruction of family and home life I guess he's really there just to remind everybody just how bad war is.
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[untitled entry]
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by Len
Created May 12, 2005
5 votes
10 comments
550w x 398h (71KB)
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