Because I work with graphics for a living, I created a text-based game for all you hard-core, right brained types:
heroes and vampires . com

*cough*ignore-my-idiotic-reaction-and-continue-like-I-didn't-edit-this*cough*

To make up for my offense it I'll post the link for ye:
http://www.heroesandvampires.com/

The forum says: "Member created games and things to do in between chopping." I humbly submit my game for tween-chop entertainment.

Mea culpa. When you posted that I didn't see that you had actually been chopping in the contests. It was a knee-jerk reaction to what I thought was spam. I whole-heartedly apologize.

ban Tofu!!!!

I like tofu and Tony. What should I do?

Ban everyone!

Yes Yes! BAN TOFU!

Who CARES if he is EXTRA FIRM!!!????

Well my wife for starters.

Hahaha! For starters??? You mean there are others who care about your firmness...

awesome game, Will be much better as more and more people sign up to it. I spent all my exp points and then I attacked people and lost a considerable amount of points, but then I dont have the exp points to regain them

Hmmmm...

I really like the description on the front page. Whoever wrote that is good. The premise of the game is awesome.

The game interface is a bit confusing until you get the hang of it (or read the instructions which I haven't done yet)

- I'd like to be able to see the map on the travel page. Maybe even clickable maps on the travel page?
- Attacking is odd. Seems like every city/town/village I go to there's only one vampire and it's always "Clown Blood Lust". He/She kicks my butt each time I try to attack and now I'm too low on things to attack with (unless I buy hundreds of falcons?)
- Weapons. I can buy multiples of each but I can't specify which weapon to use in an attack? Is the "best" weapon always used by default? How do I even equip a weapon? I bought them and it still says "No Weapon".
- Potions. How do I use them?

I started an order "PSC Addicts" castle "Choppington"

Ugh. Just read that I bought all those weapons for nothing and basically wasted my gold. See I bought them and then changed form. I thought if I changed back that I'd have the weapons again. But no. It's like you just chuck them in the garbage.

Also do NOT buy a scythe and then buy holy water or a stake. Whatever the last thing you bought is that's what you carry. Don't like that. It should be an armory where you pick what you want to equip/carry and/or attack with.

For those who may decide to play, if you buy falcons and use them all in an attack; well they're gone after the attack. I bought 30 falcons and used them only to see them go bye-bye. Should be you have them to use and lose them via damage (i.e. x number were killed in the attack).

I'ma have to take some notes on things.

agree with tofu on most stuff.

Key points

Dont make everything a one hit wonder, you should keep things after you use them (apart from potions) with maybe a chance they break etc.

Stats go down after you lose a fight, that confuses the hell of out me.

even if its not an interactive map, you should include a map of all places you can travel to and how their linked. I'm fairly sure if you wanted it to be interactive you could code the flash for it - the internal elements wouldnt be too hard but I've never dealt with telling the browser information through flash. The prospect scares me.