| this is my first attempt at making a tornado please critique away and any tips or helpfull hints would be great. all pscs2 no externals ;) |
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TheShaman
could use a touch more contrast... highlight & shadows to define more http://www.google.com/images?as_q=tornado&hl=en&output=images&svnum=10&btnG=Google+Search&as_epq=&as_oq=&as_eq=&imgtype=&imgsz=&as_filetype=&imgc=&as_sitesearch=&safe=images&as_st=y
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Granulated
the funnel is a little fat...tornados usually form the same shape because of the physics involved.
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NikolaiDK
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st1n3r
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annajon
Plenty big tip tornadoes in that link sean gave you, so perhaps just a tad more agression in the tornado?
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Martrex
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gsenthil
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dewdew
could not begain to help you.....we dont get a lot of tornado's here in the SouthCarolina
foothills, but i like it
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vunt van pumununt
agree w shaman. great 1st attempt though!
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pollyO
great first attempt. :)
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dabdi56
Put the cabel's Wire's in the Front
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Mir
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marcoballistic
good Matt
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mon8
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bigbuck
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stive
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welan
run for cover !
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abraham
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Salvezza
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manic_d
nice
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brenda
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Micose
it is GOODSK8RPUNK
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WhimSea
looks like a uterus.... oh, can't stop laughing... must stop laughing.... yeah, like Gran said, it's a bit fat... oh, my sides hurt. Well other than the shape, I like the dark cloudy sky
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jazgraphic
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acemanoj
:)
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TheShaman
google.com... &btnG=Google+Search&as_epq=&as_oq=&as_eq=&imgtype=&imgsz=&as_filetype= &imgc=&as_sitesearch=&safe=images&as_st=y
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TheShaman
damn! sorry NGSP
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
sean i cant figure out the link is the comment after your vote part of it? thanks andy and i'll try that dab keep em coming guys and gals ;)
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
ok i updated it i wasn't able to view the links sean put forth but i did take dabs advice and throw the cabels in front and hi lite the funnel cloud a tad bit more not sure let me know ok thanks ;)
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Salvezza
you need some debris flying around or near the tornado.. :P Hugz
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NOGOODSK8RPUNK
thanks for the votes comments help and sugestions ;)
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Tornado updated
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by NOGOODSK8RPUNK
Created November 04, 2007
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