| This is my first entry. Please feel free to tell me what I could improve in the future! =) - thanks Wiz for the tips ;) |
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anabe
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Wiz
Welcome K, you could start with finding any 'Tutes' on shadows to get your ballerina legs seated in the image. Ankle straps on centre leg look terrible, fix them. Ankle shapes need a more 'Graceful' shape to them. Do something about the 'Boring' bac
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nat_g31
I think you did a great job for a first entry. This picture is creative and I look forward to seeing more of your work;)
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Granulated
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annajon
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colorlover
I like your edits. We had the same idea... :)
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conaircan.
Awesome idea man! :D good work for the tail..:D
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sirenka
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abraham
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supak0ma
nice
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Napalm32
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mikey
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sonic3
Great first entry, well done
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Tesore
Welcome ;-)
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Huxa
very nice first entry. welcome to psc :) the only thing i don't like is the background. it takes away the focus from the legs.
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Wiz
... 'ground. Pay more attention to the 'shape' of the shoes, ballerina shoes do have blunt 'points' ;-). Take this as a constructive critique and show me what you can do with your improvements! Regards Wiz
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Kudeux
Thanks nat! Wiz, thanks alot for your suggestions, I'll see what I can do!
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Wiz
Improvement yes, but get serious with that background, it's too flat and cartoony. You haven't fixed the ankle laces, fix those and the background and I'll give you another class 'Smiley' ;-)
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Kudeux
Ok Wiz, I got really frustrated with those stupid ankle straps! hehe. I still think they look horrible but unfortunately I don't have the time to fix them atm. Thanks alot for the help! highly appreciated :D And thanks to the others for the votes! =)
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Kudeux
P.s: i agree for the background comment but I deliberately added he puppets to give a lighter feel to my picture. I did hesitate but I seem to like it ^^
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Monster Elegance - Edit2
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by Kudeux
Created July 02, 2009
19 votes
5 comments
618w x 597h (60KB)
1,268 views
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